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PostSubject: Beta (duh xD)   Sat Dec 07, 2013 10:33 am

Wanted to get some feedback before I edit the rest of this in case it's just terrible. Few things you should know before you comment:

1. The text is subject to change
2. Colour correction isn't great but meh
3. When the song 'kicks in' I want quite a lot of impact but I'm unsure of the shakes, some of them I love, some look pretty bad.

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PostSubject: Re: Beta (duh xD)   Sat Dec 07, 2013 1:50 pm

I actually dont see anything wrong XD
I know your going to change the text, but the only thing I would change besides the font is not have it in all caps on some of the lines ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Beta (duh xD)   Sat Dec 07, 2013 2:45 pm

The first part until 0:51 it was really amazing. Then the other part its good but i don´t like the scenes.. i don´t have any problem with dbz or bleach but watching the first part i though the video was about war, destruction or violence and then i saw goku ssj and ichigo and it felt a little out of place in my opinion.
Also in that part i dont like those strong shakes, but i think this is just personal taste.
Anyway hope you can finish this proyect :D and sorry for my english.






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PostSubject: Re: Beta (duh xD)   Sat Dec 07, 2013 3:22 pm

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I actually dont see anything wrong XD
I know your going to change the text, but the only thing I would change besides the font is not have it in all caps on some of the lines ^^
I'm glad, and yeah the text will probably be completely changed. I'll probably fix it last if I finish the amv.
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PostSubject: Re: Beta (duh xD)   Sat Dec 07, 2013 3:26 pm

xDieguitoAMV wrote:
The first part until 0:51 it was really amazing. Then the other part its good but i don´t like the scenes.. i don´t have any problem with dbz or bleach but watching the first part i though the video was about war, destruction or violence and then i saw goku ssj and ichigo and it felt a little out of place in my opinion.
Also in that part i dont like those strong shakes, but i think this is just personal taste.
Anyway hope you can finish this proyect :D  and sorry for my english.
I know what you mean, the amv is really about the "cruel world" and starts off with how bad the world is but the rest of the quotes change it so it's pretty much about characters over coming the 'cruel world.' It might help if I link the video with all the quotes;



About the shakes, I really don't know what to do with them because they work alright on the parts there, but I've edited a bit more and the strong shakes do not work so I'll either need to make new shakes entirely, or gradually dull down the shakes or use different but strong shakes on the other parts. (Shakes are all that I have xD). I'll see what others say about them.

Thanks for the feedback so far :)
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PostSubject: Re: Beta (duh xD)   Sun Dec 08, 2013 1:36 am

yeah pretty much like Diego said!
good luck.



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