nice idea with the picture :)
At 10-11s be careful your video is not following perfectly with the size of the picture ( i don't know if you understand me but you can see the video inside the picture is not moving when the whole scene is moving )
You have frame blending as well, would be better if you fix it
I guess the black spot with the picture is not done yet at 13s o:
I did not like the transition with the eye at 25s
Hope my comment will help you and i look forward to see more!