I posted on the other topic but it's better here thanks!
Just in case if you don't see i post again my comment
But most of your masking transitions are useless especially in the first part with the arms, body and eyes. The lips synch at 20s looks useless for me cuz it's the only one and dunno but it's only me for that. The part where the girl is singing around 1min08 is out of place, you have action and then you have this so meh D:
I would enjoy this video way better with only raw editing and some colors corrections like you did! But yes nice scenes selection :)